Spring

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A sonnet-lipogram written on May 14, 2024 11.53pm

Lipogram is an omition of letter. Hence, letter A was asked to be omitted. Just a try on this type, sonnet-lipogram

Winter is coming to its striking end Winning crowns for its glorious fulfillment Lush greenery soon grows its perfect blend With multi-hues in mesmerizing vent. While sunrise showers blessings on the ground Flying critters delight on bursting tones Every green spot struggles to peek, to mound Engulfed by confetti dropped on wide zones. Birds perching on bushes to huge trees sing Midst the stillness of fresh flowing rivers Wind’s wings of comforts hug in sweetest swing With spring’s promises of hope forever. Whitest thick clouds glide from the bluest sky Unveiling spring’s wonder from God Most High!

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 5/22/2024 11:44:00 AM

Lovely write I adored reading your work

Len Gasun
Date: 5/25/2024 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Yolanda for readingy poem and your encouraging comment giving me consolation. God bless you always and your writings.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 5/21/2024 9:27:00 AM

Beautifully penned spring hues, Len. Enjoyed reading your poem!!

Len Gasun
Date: 5/25/2024 10:22:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments my dear poet friend Smita. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your positive comments are my consolations. God bless you always and your writing. Hugs

Christina Bowring

Date: 5/18/2024 1:10:00 PM

Dearest sweetest Len, what a joy this is to read my lovely. You have captured so many delights with this spring poem written in the sonnet form. I love the vivid imagery celebrating the joys of the season. ‘ Midst the stillness of fresh flowing rivers’ wind’s wings of comforts hug in sweetest swing’ what amazing, creative lines and I love the ending couplet too. A real pleasure to read and enjoy. Thank you for sharing. Loved it. Hugs to you my dear friend and blessings xx

Len Gasun
Date: 5/21/2024 12:34:00 AM

Thank you so much my dearest Christina for these heartwarming and uplifting comments. This is just a trial of lipogram my dear. I'm so delighted you've enjoyed this sonnet of mine in lipogram. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Josehf Murchison

Date: 5/14/2024 11:36:00 PM

Very well done.

Len Gasun
Date: 5/15/2024 12:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and your uplifting words my dear poet friend. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/14/2024 11:24:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Spring" write. What a great ending. It is a pretty time of the year. "Good Luck" if this is for a contest. Hugs... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.........

Len Gasun
Date: 5/14/2024 7:43:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my latest poem, a trial for a lipogram my dearest poet friend Paula. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you so much for the inspiring and uplifting words once again with your loving wishes. My loving wishes to you as well in all my dearest poet friend. God bless you always. Hugs