If you only knew
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Poetic Form: Alliteration
Inspired: 2024 May 14
*2nd Place*
If only you knew
Contest Judged: 2024 May 19
Sponsored by: Silent One
Image: Caught in the Rain by top...com
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If you only knew ...,
of that thawing night
when stars had lost their way,
ran to hand you my umbrella,
and as we heard that distant rain
we smiled apiece as you held relief,
in a special short-of-weigh.
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Be it around, --top side face down,
feign torn grace,
and in a timely space,
a grin climbed and left
an accord in its solace realm ..., to laughter in the raining,
--and you ...,
Lord, seems tis, not a prayer or psalm ..., art returns a painting.
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My heart reigned of its love,
in the fullness thereof,
--absent to voice,
--errs to choice,
gifts to air,
Heaven's due prayer,
for I confess
a mere request.
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What seldom laws--transcending wonder,
perfumed with flaws, scents pause of one?
A blessing by Grace to trend her proper smile,
and steads farewell fairs,
... let the rain remain
... for a while?
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My Mona ...,
my Lisa ...,
my evermore ...,
If you only knew.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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