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If Only You Knew

If only you knew The effort I made for you. If only you knew The sun and the moon Were not always two. If only you knew How many flowers I threw at you. If only you knew I had your back That whole way At that podunk casino Back in Spanaway. If only you knew I was there When the tears Rolled down Your daughter's cheek. I watched you turn Meek in return. If only you knew I carried you both through That heartfelt burn. If only you knew My name, my place, My existence at all. But it hardly matters. I'll always catch you When you fall.

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Date: 5/21/2024 2:57:00 PM
i enjoyed reading this; such an appealing poem, heartfelt with a poignant undertone - congrats on your placement in the contest
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 5/22/2024 7:56:00 AM
:)
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Matt Caliri
Date: 5/21/2024 4:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlotte! Your words keep me going!
Date: 5/19/2024 11:03:00 AM
They never realise, do they.. then it is too late.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Matt Caliri
Date: 5/21/2024 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much for your placement!
Date: 5/19/2024 3:35:00 AM
this poem has themes of selflessness and unconditional love woven into wishful words. guarantees a good time. best wishes - Hiba.
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Matt Caliri
Date: 5/21/2024 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much for your thoughtful review of my piece. Always enjoy your feedback, and your own poetry!

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