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Carry your heart with me ( I carry it in my heart ) I am never without it Across the seas in the killing fields of France, Bellowing cries, suffering, Man's dying dance, Ceaseless shells rain on Mother's weeping earth, Devouring each breathless breath all future birth. Elevated to God's gate march the young and old, Forged in steel of Man's love for each other told, Grieving love in remembrance, as sorrow sways, Haunted images forever etched, the stolen brave. Inscribed on tombs on polished granite placed, Juggling hearts where life once simply graced, Killed the words that failed to hear or speak, Lucid, the air of silence, in cold winter's bleak. Mourning the stars that covet bloodied skies, Noble in sacrifice, the souls who gave us lives, Oragious the ominous clouds that brew above, Purloined the sanctity of man's eternal love. Quiescent the tongues where no joy exists, Reflections forgotten wrong paths persist, Seeking light where darkness possess hearts, Transcending the chaos before love departs, United under one banner each life is distinct, Valued each tongue, for every heart is linked. Welcome every breath into your forgiving homes, Xenophobia defeated no clay on earth to roam, You are the answer to God's intended prayers, Zest is for the living, every dead soldier swears.

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Date: 5/16/2024 5:38:00 AM
Quite a thoughtful write Daniel. I've never tried one of these before. I'm sure you spent some time on this one. So many young men with futures, all gone. So sad
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/16/2024 10:23:00 AM
Hi Tom , I wrote it while in the doctors surgery so not quite as long as you might think , I've never written one before either, but I enjoyed the thought process as it kept my mind off other things .
Date: 5/15/2024 4:27:00 PM
Daniel--your poem is simply outstanding and one of the best 'takes' I've seen for the contest. Amazing how you created a fluid rhyme scheme along with the ABC poem format. Impressive. Plus your words spoke of the reality of the horror of war. How poignant your words are with your use of the dead soldier. Awesome and great contest entry. Faving....have a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/16/2024 10:29:00 AM
Hi Sara, and thank you as always for being so kind with your words, and for your continued support, it's always appreciated , your Irish friend Danny
Date: 5/15/2024 1:58:00 PM
It is a very sad, very real poem. I feel the great sense of loss while reading your poem. Ironically, these words bring to life wartime's deaths. I'm thankful to you for bringing these facts to light.
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/15/2024 2:34:00 PM
Dearest Hilda , thank you so much for your continued support in reading my poems, your visit and words always light up my days and for that I truly thank you . Danny

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