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I wanted to call this

After 'After'

as it is a sequel to 'After'.

Alas Soup doesn't allow.

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With remnants of mankind’s existence corroding His lighting extinguished, his concrete eroding The birds and the beasts have reconquered his space Those same birds and beasts have forgotten his face The forests, once dwindled, have burgeoned once more Oak, elm and ash rupture old asphalt floor Long vacant dwellings, now caves, dens and lairs For ground dwelling mammals while bats live upstairs The rivers all sparkle, their waters so clear And large rusting pipes discharge nothing to fear Waves tickle beaches, the breeze is their breath With no evil lurking at periscope depth Life springs abundant by land, sea and sky Unhindered by species who weren’t meant to fly Trees brightly clad in gold, russet and green Alas, man cannot see how things could have been And so all seems well but there’s still need of prayer There’s horror to come from a long way… up there This world, free at last, of man’s lethal know how Could sure use a serving of man’s knowledge now Unserviced and rusting, the launchers stand bare No human stands ready; no missile sits there Mankind had known that the space rock would come And man would have nuked it… but he’s gone: Ho hum!

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Date: 5/9/2024 8:44:00 AM
Looks like the planet is doomed with or without our ingenuity Terry, so many extinction events have happened in the past, from super volcanos to asteroids, could we stop another one, maybe not with today’s technology, I’ve read both your instalments and they are excellently written pieces, with clever wording and rhyme throughout, never a dull moment in your poetry! Oh yeah on the bright side the Earth will be enveloped by the sun in about 4 billion years, Ho hum indeed! Cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/9/2024 3:23:00 PM
Not quite! another half dozen zeros behind that 8000, should be fine lol!
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/9/2024 9:53:00 AM
Aha! By then we’ll have developed factor 8000 sun screen… that ought to do it………… shouldn’t it?
Date: 5/8/2024 5:04:00 PM
the fluidity of your rhyme scheme is outstanding and your message about us humans...nice sequel to your previous poem. Your humor at the end is your signature and I enjoy it. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 5/8/2024 3:43:00 PM
Nicely done Terry, rhythm, meter, rhyme and a twisted humor...read this one first now I must go find out what happened before After 'After'
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/8/2024 4:02:00 PM
Thanks, John. ‘After’ is one of those poems I struggled to get write during my (not completely lifted) block. It took numerous tweaks to get the thing shareable but finally I felt it was ‘there’. After ‘After’ just felt… required. Hope you enjoy ‘After’ too. Terry
Date: 5/8/2024 2:34:00 PM
absolutely love the flow and rhythm and rhyme Terry and a dash of humour at then end to boot:-) hugs jan xx
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/8/2024 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I wanted to suggest that mankind, for all his sins, isn’t ALL bad. The deliberate irony in the ‘Ho hum’ at the end came out of nowhere, and ending a post apocalyptic pre apocalyptic situation with ‘Ho hum’ tickled my funny bone. Glad you enjoyed the gag. Terry
Date: 5/8/2024 1:28:00 PM
Terry, this is a great sequel to your initial poem about the 'good riddance' of humans and welcome back to the beauty of nature and the wild beasts. 'Life springs abundant' with the absence of the despoilers. Question: which beast has written your verses? Or were your thoughts left for the aliens as a Star Trek log history titled, Earth: Once Home to the evil breed called Human.
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/8/2024 3:50:00 PM
Thanks, Lin. I had asked myself the ‘who’s writing’ question. Decided to leave the question unanswered (although I did have a few notions). Let’s just call it ‘the big cosmic voice of everything’). Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 5/8/2024 1:07:00 PM
i always look forward to reading your poems, terry - the rhyme alone is worth the effort - but you also know how to tell a story in a fascinating way. this is brilliant with that little touch of humor at the end to remind us it's one of yours...
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Terry Flood
Date: 5/8/2024 3:44:00 PM
I’ve always considered that planet Earth would be better off without mankind messing things up.. the only caveat I can think of being that next big asteroid… I doubt we could destroy one but only man would so much as try. Glad you enjoyed, Ilene. Terry

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