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A - TYPES OF FORMS Poetry Contest

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"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart) I am never without it..." E.E. Cummings Hello my dearest darling, it was our time to wake, The rustic rooster had already roused my reverie, Heralding the dewy dawn Of our new great day. For I could never live without you. I yearned for your presence all the time. Everywhere in the countryside was peace And crowned with our steadfast love With the sound of nurturing nature. As I lay on our comfy broad bed, I looked at my still-slumbering wedded wife. Her fragrant freckled face looked on so serenely, A soft sweet smile hovered on her luscious lips So peaceful and fair, As if she were amid many pleasant placid dreams So I could not bear to wake her up and spoil Her various favorite fantasies. Suddenly her emerald eyes fluttered wide open, And saw my boyish grim smiling seductively at her. She grabbed my head and lowered me on her lips That smell of lavish lavender filled my nostrils. This was a harmonious heaven on earth. Later we went down for our favorite food, We rode our bikes and pedaled hard, Admiring the snow-capped mountains that rose far. Cedars, larches, and junipers adorned the steep slopes Where eagles, kites and vultures flew Searching for their potential prey. Whilst on the grassy picturesque plain, Warblers, thrushes and orioles Twittered their serenade symphony songs. Finally, we arrived at my Taverna And beckoned the masterful Manager. Heard the required report on the gains I made. Everything was smooth For I wear my enchanting emotions up my sleeve. We idled the dreamy day away, Hugging and kissing most of the time. Partook of a delicious dinner for two, But at closing time we went back home, To a well-needed restful rural repose In each other’s enticing embrace. Placed 1st

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Date: 5/26/2024 8:29:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........
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Date: 5/26/2024 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, dear Paula.
Date: 5/19/2024 9:23:00 AM
Very cute, Victor. I believed I had clicked on a girl's poem and was going to comment on a job well done from a guy's point of view . Haha
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Date: 5/17/2024 9:44:00 PM
Excellent in its description of a romantic couple:)
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Date: 5/16/2024 11:21:00 PM
Beautiful, loving, nostalgic poem Victor dear friend. We are now retired and living in a lovely little cottage in an estate. We feel like teenagers though, we do what we want when we want, wake up when we want, watch a whole series of episodes in a day, quite rebellious with our free time, and then we visit our son daughter in law and our very precious little grand daughetr of 18 months old, who is a joy, late in life she arrived for all 4 of us but what a joy. Hugs & Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 5/16/2024 6:36:00 PM
Victor, your lovely tale recounts a perfect day-one fraught with romance, pleasant activity and beautiful scenery. A charming story, my friend. :)
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Date: 5/16/2024 3:02:00 AM
A beautiful story/poem Victor describing a day spent with the love of your life, memories are made from days of bliss such as this…. Beryl
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Date: 5/16/2024 12:07:00 AM
So romantic ! A beautiful day in the life of the lovers in a rustic and serene back drop. The joy and contentment they experience is heart warming. A sweet love poem rich in beautiful alliterations. All the Best dear Victor.
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Date: 5/15/2024 5:30:00 PM
This beautiful poem covers an entire romantic day. It is amazing what you do with economy of words. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 5/15/2024 5:22:00 PM
Great romantic with alteration poem, good for a winner in the contest. Hugs my friend
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Date: 5/15/2024 3:48:00 PM
Victor, a wonderful romantic poem with great alliterations. - hugs
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Date: 5/15/2024 2:57:00 PM
Sahha, Victor, lost to words but ten--Fave, Aloha, William
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Date: 5/15/2024 9:42:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write/story/picture. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck"  Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.........
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Date: 5/15/2024 7:07:00 AM
The profound and moving poetry you have written as a memorial to everlasting love and beloved friendship is very moving, Victor. I delighted in the enchanting odyssey you painted with your words. A good tale is something you can spin.
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Date: 5/15/2024 5:54:00 AM
You weave romantic outings and picturesque scenes very nicely Victor, best wishes
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Date: 5/15/2024 5:36:00 AM
Dear Victor, Your poetic tribute to enduring love and cherished companionship is a breathtaking and such deep heartfelt emotion. I loved how each verse transports me into a world where love reigns supreme, intertwined with nature's embrace. Your poetic journey through picturesque landscapes, adorned with natural wonders and melodious avian serenades, is wondrously filled with sensory delights, enriching the celebration of your love's enduring bond. Victor this is a masterpiece that that is filled with the universal yearning for a transcendent love. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/15/2024 5:30:00 AM
Ahh!! Very romantic one plus the delightful look at nature. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 5/15/2024 5:20:00 AM
Much enjoyed the romantic journey through your words, Victor. You know how to weave a fine story.
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Date: 5/15/2024 3:30:00 AM
Dear victor, this is beautiful, so descriptive and flawless storytelling throughout this well articulated poem flowing with seamless alliterations. I love how youv paid attention to little details to convey an engaging read. I especially love “ I looked at my still-slumbering wedded wife. Her fragrant freckled face looked on so serenely, A soft sweet smile hovered on her luscious lips So peaceful and fair” i felt serenity as i read those words! So peaceful! Love it! Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 5/14/2024 11:43:00 PM
so elegant and romantic declaration, great poetry, aliterations are "sweet", enjoyed yann
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Date: 5/14/2024 11:29:00 PM
I very much enjoyed this romantic write. I must say I love the diversity of your poetry.
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Date: 5/14/2024 11:05:00 PM
Great job with alliteration , Victor, as well as with romance and story-telling.
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