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1/3/2018 12:25:52 PM
Introduce myself	Hi there, new to the group today Recently started writing poems about my life as I'd like to produce a book called My Life In Poetry. No idea if I'm any good but its a great way of expressing feelings and I've only just plucked up the courage to post one of them (on here). I don't use fancy words, just simple but so far they have made me smile, and the few I've wrote for others have made them smile too. Hoping to get some constructive criticism from more experienced writers
1/3/2018 12:31:42 PM
A Mothers Love	They say a mothers love is the strongest? They say the bond between mother and daughter can’t be broken? You walked along the street, never looking behind I was 5, but knew, we could not rewind You were gone, leaving me alone What would happen, would you change your mind A letter, a visit, or just phone? No fight for your first born My young heart was left torn You looking forward to your new life My dad alone, without his wife Now a lover to his best friend Was this a bad dream that would soon end? Years passed with little contact I tried to forgive, make an effort But you had two others and I had lost you forever You were my mum, yet still a stranger I now have a son, my pride and joy And our bond will never break, nor be destroyed Cause a mothers love is the strongest, except for a few I guess I was unlucky, but you were too Thirty five years missed, forgotton memories, no regrets I hope he was worth it, cause I have my dad And his love is the best.
1/3/2018 12:32:58 PM
A Mothers Love	This was the first "poem" I ever wrote just a few months ago
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