Poetry Forum

taytaysuperfun - all messages by user

1/28/2012 9:38:20 PM
hi guys	so I am only a highschooler I like to run and watch movies but poetry is like a side hobby for me that works really well so keep a watchful eye for my work and have someone take me under their wing please.
2/17/2012 9:03:33 PM
Really looking for critque!! A Thousand Eyes	Well lets see...I write love poems that is the only thing that I ca seem to write but when I do I write it so that there is a little bounce to it and you can feel exactly what it is that I'm feeling. Try reading my love poems and don't try to copy it, that's totally not what I'm saying but just see it from that perspective. Reading other's poems makes your poetry a little better because you either see what it is that they are doing right and what they are doing wrong. It definitely has potential but it needs a little work in your wording and the rhythm.
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