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8/25/2011 9:22:41 PM
A piece of work for you to advise me on!	This girl, she's crying inside, But all everyone sees is smiles, This girl, she's hurting inside, She's lived like this for quite a while, Always holding her pain inside, She won't ruin everyone's time, This girl, she's breaking down inside, But all she does is smile, Those deep eyes, Hold a lot world of misery, Playing pictures from her mind, Showing her past, her history, She doesn't want to remember, But the memories continue to play, Every night she prays, Wishing them away, But this girl lies with her laugh, And hides behind a mask, So that no-one can see her pain, Her past, her denials, This girl, she's dying inside, Although no-one can see her pain, She just continues to smile bright, From day to everyday, With beautiful lying eyes, For everyone to see, Everyone and anyone, Everyone but me.
8/25/2011 9:26:45 PM
PIN CUSHION	I really love this poem, it's amazing and such subtle yet vivid descriptions. Congratulations, keep up the good work Aimie x
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