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7/18/2011 6:28:03 PM
Thanks in advance	Hello, I'm SpanishRose. I am new here. Please feel free to leave any suggestions on my writings. I am here to learn. Especially the forms of poetry...I know next to nothing. Thank you all.
7/18/2011 6:30:33 PM
Don't hold back	(I also don't even know what form of poetry this would be considered.) Destructive rose with your thorns Elegance deserving to be forlorn Stabbing those who hold you close Deceiving those who love you most Called by any other name, just as sweet? How about betraying, beguiling, or disaster to complete Lonely rose, receiving love Yet only reciprocating with sharp pointed shove Then someone reaches out Reality piercingly clear Your're certainly lovely But never loving, my dear
7/18/2011 6:45:31 PM
Save Me Thanks for any critique you can offer	"I'm desperate, can't you hear it?" I love that.
7/18/2011 6:52:11 PM
The Dreaming Tree	This is beautiful. What does "whisper a song full of vowels to the wind" mean? Just curious.
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