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3/14/2019 5:10:56 AM
new girl here...	hey there! my name is eckho, i live in Texas, and I've been writing since middle school i suppose... I'm pretty unsure of my stuff and i have a variety of things i write about. I've never entered any contest or had anyone look at what I've got. truthfully, it terrifies me lol... but i really hope to get some constructive criticism and see what i can do with my words when y'all are through with me... edited by eckholynn on 3/14/2019
3/14/2019 5:15:39 AM
critique please	Once again the fool got played By one greater than she When he used her heart against her And once again the truth Pierces through Like the sharpest steel blade As it causes her soul to bleed The tears stream down her face Her spirit broken like glass Shattered Shards Surrounding As she Spins in Solitude What smile to hide her pain What paint to mask her rage This circus called love Only Leers and Lies Menacing Mysteries Never was her passion felt Never was she heard The one entrusted to keep her Only let her burn
3/14/2019 5:44:59 AM
what should i do different?	soulmates Can you feel me Out across the Matrix Where only our spirits can see I feel you And I know everything I hear your heartbeat Pulsing through my veins And I know forever Suddenly not so frightening I will dance in the rays Of your light And I will smile Loving you, loving me Seeing me in your eyes And how you love me Softly love me I will sing you love songs Words from my heart My lips To your heart To your spirit And I will love you And you will love me Please don't ever let me go I will hold you in my heart And never let you go I am yours
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