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5/28/2010 8:21:40 AM
Justin Street
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I’m what they call
Scourge of the sky
From clouds I fall
Don’t ask why
No matter blood and gore
I am the survivor
Through Carnage I soar
The holy diver
Blazing wings beat
All battles halted
Feeling disapproving heat
Shining light, exalted
Wave of judgment flows
To hell I am your driver
I am your pain and woe
The holy diver
::so what do you think::
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5/29/2010 5:45:28 PM
James Fraser
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Another rock soul, lost to the never ending death gaol. Where in the audience we will be, when it's time for you and thee. We will all become lost "Children of the Sea" lookout!!!!!
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