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12/27/2011 12:10:13 PM

Liberty Robbins
Posts: 3
If I were the bottle,
You would press your lips to my neck nightly.
If I were the liquid,
You would consume me multiple.
But I am just a woman,
Who needs your attention always.
If only you could
Liquor lips.
edited by robbins11 on 12/27/2011
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