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10/8/2020 7:14:49 PM
Kelly McManis
Posts: 2
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Dark is the night,
Darker the soul,
Fathomless depths,
Stories untold...
Vision now gone,
Reliance on touch,
Grappling for anything,
Stumbling so much...
Inner reflection,
Compounds your fear,
For years of ignorance,
Make salvation unclear.
Only the strong survive,
As seen throughout time,
Weakness your burden,
A punishable crime...
Until cleansing the soul,
Deeper you fall,
Will light again shine,
Or shall in darkness you crawl?
Choose wisely,
For chances given are few,
Consequences may vary,
But the catalyst is undeniably YOU...
edited by Totsie28 on 10/8/2020
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10/26/2021 9:19:48 PM
Ms Affection
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I really enjoyed this
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