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10/3/2020 12:00:19 AM Peter Dougal Posts: 6	Lostin a smile in need of a friend Foundin a kiss that could never end Lostin footsteps that leave no trace Foundin an emptiness that caresses space Lostin echoes that haunt the mind Foundin a blindness that knows no time Lostin a heaven that has no skies Foundin a love that never dies
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12/29/2020 9:56:23 PM shakti Anderson Posts: 3	I like how you combine the words. I also like the phrase "caresses space."
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12/29/2020 11:16:42 PM Alyson Taylor Posts: 1	hi
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