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9/28/2020 12:27:46 AM

Mark Anthony Bartolo
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I Smiled

I smiled when I’ve gone for a drink
Sitting on a couch for some tunes
I smiled when I’d no time to think
Because of last-minute fortunes

Pity I had no time to greet
The gleaming bright light on your teeth
My sight was never left behind
By the guest with her child in mind

I smiled when you’ve watched me perform
I smiled when you’ve killed these perils
I smiled when you’ve read my profile
I smiled when you’ve kept me in peace

Therefore, I have no dark regrets
Of playing those grateful poets
edited by Mrk345yij on 9/28/2020

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