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8/12/2020 3:05:36 PM
Linda Skinner
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Why?
Here at this haven,
words come easily.
Your gentle breeze, relaxing waters roll
the stress from my body.
Thoughts focus-creating.
Seagulls sailing high above, chipmunks chatter,
and loons, oh loons, such hideous laughter.
Time has no meaning,
no pressure, no deadlines.
Waves caress my body, soothing magic.
This gentle flow of life;
could it be bottled, captured and sold?
Oh, but at what price?
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9/4/2020 7:01:05 AM
jazlaansam
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good
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I am a Learner at Online Quran Teachers muqaddimah al jazariyyah
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