Poetry Forum
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8/11/2020 2:26:54 PM
Linda Skinner
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My world has been
opened up.
A computer-nothing fancy,
just the basics.
Amazing, what one can do!
Editing tools endless,
yes, you blow my mind.
I do have one point to make-
it is my poem
you just printed off.
Created by me-take that!
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9/17/2020 11:20:48 AM
Jack Webster
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Love the well timed line break at the end of line one
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