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2/13/2020 9:37:25 PM

Alison Hodges
Posts: 6
Spring Afternoon




The wind among the trees,

the sun behind a cloud.

A peaceful day in my backyard

is where my soul is found.




It may not be too large,

for fences it enclose

but my whole world waits for me there

for worries there run slow.




Leaves in sunlight shimmer,

the cardinal spreads it’s wings,

the day frolics among the leaves,

a garden cricket sings.




Flowers aren’t yet blooming

but summer’s drawing near.

It gently whispers on the wind

right there, beneath my ear.
edited by Ananda on 2/13/2020
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