Poetry Forum

home recent topics recent posts search faq

Forum Home » High Critique » My Autumn Dream

For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
10/27/2011 5:53:16 AM

Tom Larrow
Posts: 4
A request to tell all of your kinfolk

That are inside Heavens Gate

To keep watch on one of my folk

For she has a special date

Their just east of South Dakota

Though she's in a different state

For these Doctor's in Minnesota

Want a team to secure her fate

Their are many special surgeons

Who all do their job first rate

Prayers are needed, even sermons

Don't want any wishes to be late

In spring they plan for her to home

I guess Grampa, will have to wait

Back to the farm to gather and tell stories of life, hope and inspiration.
permalink • reply with quote

Forum Home » High Critique » My Autumn Dream

Powered by AspNetForum © 2006-2010 Jitbit Software