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8/6/2019 5:27:06 PM
Jamila Bestre
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The Moon's Duty
An eye has been gazing at us
In the midst of the starry night
Its lens is always beauteous
Soothing and being ever so bright
Some nights it would sleep
leaving us to go astray
Its brightening gaze will not creep
To guide us the way
Lens glances west and east
Sure to Watch each corners
For it might reveal, the beast
who lurks under our waters
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