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4/14/2019 5:48:20 PM
Unknown Poet
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The silence that we hear
Is the worst curse of them all
It’s forgiveness never given
It’s a warning not to fall
If you knew not to wait
Would you say goodbye
Would you say “I love you”
Or “I’m sorry that I lied”
That silence that you hear
Ringing in your ear
Is a word left unspoken
That still rings loud and clear
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5/6/2019 1:33:44 PM
Jeaunice Burnette
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This was a good piece. It made me think of times when I left things unsaid to someone I loved, and how I regretted it. You're right silence can be deafening. Keep up the great work.
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