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2/22/2019 1:29:20 PM

MELISSA ROMERO
Posts: 1
ComeAlive

I’vemade myself
small
insignificant
undistinguishable
myneeds, my life, myself
small
whisperingoffenses
bequiet arguments
scarcity,anxiety, depravity
Findyou voice, Child
speak
truthin Love
Comealive, child
breathe
slowdown,trust yourself
and theGod
thatis in You
abundance,peace, fearless
Be thegirl who
raisesher hands in worship
shouting
praise
Come Alive.
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3/25/2019 2:00:47 PM

Wayne Kingston
Posts: 6
self talk in unique poetic form (intentional spellings?). fun read; well done.
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