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10/16/2018 6:57:07 AM Wendy Nipas Posts: 38	Woman I don’t think that I should teach you Actually, I don’t prefer To be neither coach nor tutor The thought alone won’t make me stir As a female I’m entitled To feel as feminine as I can And don’t judge me for expecting The validation of a man Not that I am unaware of My own value or my pride I just want to be respected Though weaker vessel, or despite May my weakness make me precious May it force a gentle touch Can chivalry still be requested? Or would that be a tad too much? I still prefer to be a woman With lady looks and temperament With girly traits whether odd or silly I consider them a compliment What makes me different is a virtue It makes me special, yes indeed I was created as a woman To God the glory for this breed. Wendy Nipas edited by wendyme on 10/16/2018
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10/17/2018 9:03:13 PM Bob Atkinson Posts: 294	Another way to look at it: www.bobatkinson-poet.com/2018/08/feminist-folly-by-bob-atkinson.html?q=feminist
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10/18/2018 8:29:51 AM Wendy Nipas Posts: 38	Thank you Bob. I did check out your poem. I love it and I do agree. Bob_Atkinson wrote: Another way to look at it: www.bobatkinson-poet.com/2018/08/feminist-folly-by-bob-atkinson.html?q=feminist
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