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8/30/2018 3:48:06 PM

Kedar Ingale
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We are not who we are
Filled with worries, woes and moans,
the drowned ship drenched to bones
A dying soul succumbed to wounds,
in a forest with a fear for hounds
We are not who we are
Passers of a tunnel,
at the end of which there is a light
Not bright enough, but enough to beat the night
A creature without wings, with the fire of taking flight.
We are not who we are
Shinier than shine and taller than skies
Taming every conquest with a hell of a might.
Difficult to be seen, the brightest bright.
So O dear mine
We are not who we are
We are what we choose, to be
that is really who we are.

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kedari15

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