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12/23/2017 3:55:00 PM

desola Lois
Posts: 4
CHRISTMAS IS HERE AGAIN

MAMA NEVER STOPPED DECORATING

DOESN'T SHE KNOW MARY IS ABOUT TO GIVE BIRTH?

PAPA IS NOT HOME YET?

ARE WE NOT GOING TO CELEBRATE?

WHY ARE PEOPLE ALWAYS COMING TO OUR HOUSE?

IS MARY GOING TO GIVE BIRTH AT OUR HOUSE?

WHY IS EVERYWHERE SO COLD?

I HOPE BABY JESUS WILL BE ALRIGHT.
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