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12/14/2017 3:06:57 PM

This poem is for all the simple girls who could fit anywhere and get along well with anyone
The girls who overlook the flaws of others and see the best in everyone
The ones who cut their hearts open and bleed for all
The depressed, the disappointed, the lovesick, the rejected, and the distressed
Who find happiness in the happiness of others
The ones who neither judge nor condemn others for being different
The women who wear sunshine to conceal their angry fits
The ones who even in their state of despair epitomize hope
I'm writing for the women with stillborn dreams who propel the aspirations of others
The women whose shoulders are made of tissues, yet their pillows flood every night
This poem is for society's sunshine girls, the closeted cry babies, the dark clouds
edited by Destinee Nayram on 12/14/2017
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