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5/13/2011 4:47:41 AM Abigail Aye-Addo Posts: 2	Calm spirits be me Not that I have no mercy knee Calm spirits be mine Not that I was blind down the line Or doubted how indicators align Calm spirits be free I did feel the urge to flee I see impending terror somebody hear my plea Minds are scattered scare How do you think their hearts will fare In this forth coming, calm spirits will me spare Calm spirits will heal Find how to make again beautiful real And put hope in the hollow Hurt, broken, destroyed please follow In panic reign from us strife bleed Calm spirit did constructive minds breed Calm spirits be need edited by dawordsmith on 5/13/2011
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1/11/2012 6:14:04 PM Tetteh Addo Posts: 2	deep words Smith
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2/4/2012 4:57:53 AM Robert Ball Posts: 15	dawordsmith wrote: Calm spirits be me Not that I have no mercy knee Calm spirits be mine Not that I was blind down the line Or doubted how indicators align Calm spirits be free I did feel the urge to flee I see impending terror somebody hear my plea Minds are scattered scare How do you think their hearts will fare In this forth coming, calm spirits will me spare Calm spirits will heal Find how to make again beautiful real And put hope in the hollow Hurt, broken, destroyed please follow In panic reign from us strife bleed Calm spirit did constructive minds breed Calm spirits be need edited by dawordsmith on 5/13/2011 -- Robert Ball
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2/4/2012 4:58:41 AM Robert Ball Posts: 15	quote=sonsofthefather]dawordsmith wrote: Calm spirits be me Not that I have no mercy knee Calm spirits be mine Not that I was blind down the line Or doubted how indicators align Calm spirits be free I did feel the urge to flee I see impending terror somebody hear my plea Minds are scattered scare How do you think their hearts will fare In this forth coming, calm spirits will me spare Calm spirits will heal Find how to make again beautiful real And put hope in the hollow Hurt, broken, destroyed please follow In panic reign from us strife bleed Calm spirit did constructive minds breed Calm spirits be need edited by dawordsmith on 5/13/2011 -- Robert Ball
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