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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
10/15/2017 2:56:56 PM

ROMY ROY
Posts: 2
Sail across the blue sky with your wings ,
Kiss the milky cloud before she turns grey.
Let breeze be your companion,
Up above, in your birds eye view,
The panaromic filth of our city resides.
Fly away till your wings are sore
Fly way to your destiny.
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