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9/20/2017 6:35:11 PM
Ameenah Noor
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I can't stop drowning
I can't come up for air
I can't swim
It's consuming me
my lungs are burning
I can't get out
but i want to get away from this
go away, please go away
i thought it would be nothing at all
it was supposed to go away
but it didnt
it didnt go away
it followed me
and it haunted me
it became a nightmare
little did i know
it would follow me around
forever and ever
there would be no happy ending
there would be no happily ever after.
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