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8/8/2017 4:30:48 AM

Natalie Titley
Posts: 2
Through the darkness
Into the night
Don't be afraid to stand up
Be tall, face towards the light

Stride strong
Do it with a purpose
It's time to heal now
Bring your demons to the surface

The fight will be long
You can't give up
Some days will be hard
Enough is enough

I can overcome this
One step at a time
The life I was living to please you
Will soon become mine
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8/8/2017 6:13:14 AM

Stan Bradford
Posts: 5
I have been there.
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