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6/28/2017 9:46:14 AM

Anuradha sowmyanarayanan
Posts: 3

ZEPHYR

A softgentle wind on a navy night
makes thebranches to rub against slight
which werestill after a tough fight;
With a softgentle wind on a maze
then thebranches had a gaze
whichinduced a spark to love trace;
Moon shines,stars glitter, sky charms
amidst asoft gentle wind with no norms
makes thebranches hear whispers form;
A softgentle wind carries the fragrance of love
flowers,buds and stars breath and bow
makes thebranches smell it in the grove;
Then thesoft gentle wind dropped dew
to thebranches to taste their love due
to melt thetiff between the two
A soft gentle wind made them twig.

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