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6/21/2017 9:35:07 PM

keith osborne
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Standing on the edge of a cliff

toking a smooth fat spliff

waiting to catch sight of a skiff

Floating it's way on by

Watching the majestic girl soar

no longer a beast of lore

wish for increasingly more

She passes a look on the fly

Brown with white head and tail

power that will never fail

enchanting how she sets sail

Makes me start to cry

Bounding stag hidden by ivied hoods

sneaky 'lil squirrel dashing with his goods

amber kits darting through the boxwoods

Violet western sun in the sky

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