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6/27/2017 6:58:06 PM
Debbie Guzzi
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[Two of the three lines must be grammatically & conceptually linked. The beginning of each line is not capitalized. The content of a haiku is objective and most often about nature, not man.]
Volcanic within
Cool calm waters without
Master of themselves
haiku is based on something seen & speaks of some felt by using multisensory input.
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