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6/4/2017 2:21:25 PM

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Before and After Death

Don’t be afraid of Me !
I bring only peace to you
Before me you were in a long journey
A journey without a Meaning
You cried you shouted
for me to come
and here I am in front of you
Before me you feared all
After me all fear you
Before me you learned to live
After me you learned to love.
Before me you stressed your life
After me your stress disappeared.
Before me you lack knowledge
After me you became the treasury of wisdom.
You now know everything
And now you want to go back again
And now you want to play that game again
And again I am sending you back
So that you can learn to enjoy your play.
Through that long journey you will
cry you shout for me to come
And again I will appears
“Death” I am will take you with me again.
And you will say you are not afraid of me!
You the immortal and I the immortal
will disappear into that endless sky!
edited by Devalekshmi.D on 6/8/2017

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