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5/25/2017 6:13:04 PM
Bernie Mac
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Hi guys,
First time poster here. Can you please give me your thoughts on my latest poem? Please be honest, thanks in advance.
Beautiful
You are beautiful because your eyes are lovely
You are beautiful because you look unbelievably good in your new dress
You are beautiful because your lips are so amazing to kiss
You are beautiful because you are fearfully and wonderfully made
You are beautiful because your skin is so soft
You are beautiful because you have the most perfect... (LOL .. OK I deleted a couple of lines and stopped this section)
Please know you are beautiful
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