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4/5/2011 10:11:08 AM

Ashley Blodgett
Posts: 5
Extravagant-
The cries for help
Unheard

Step by step
She walks into the darkness.
Each without a print-

I guess her path will remain
Unknown. Unsure-
Of all the places she would go
How she would get there and

Why.
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4/5/2011 10:32:15 AM

Ashley Blodgett
Posts: 5
I would really like some comments on my poem please... more at ashthepoet.blospot.com
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5/16/2011 10:50:45 PM

Matt Hunt
Posts: 10
I liked it. Almost as if she is a living ghost. Good job with this.
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