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4/5/2011 10:11:08 AM Ashley Blodgett Posts: 5	Extravagant- The cries for help Unheard Step by step She walks into the darkness. Each without a print- I guess her path will remain Unknown. Unsure- Of all the places she would go How she would get there and Why.
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4/5/2011 10:32:15 AM Ashley Blodgett Posts: 5	I would really like some comments on my poem please... more at ashthepoet.blospot.com
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5/16/2011 10:50:45 PM Matt Hunt Posts: 10	I liked it. Almost as if she is a living ghost. Good job with this.
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