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3/31/2011 10:36:29 AM dave archuletta Posts: 10	*With a simple act of tracing my face* *She had knighted my soul* *Sustained - by the given of innocence and grace* *With a fingertip placed on my forehead like a sword set on point* *Life promises inferred* *I then assured* *We would both share together in acquaint* edited by Dave Archuletta on 3/31/2011 edited by Dave Archuletta on 3/31/2011 -- David Archuletta
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4/1/2011 6:39:03 AM Manouchka doreus Posts: 23	make sure that your using the words in contxt.... i understand the last line but wld th nxt guy
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