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9/5/2017 12:37:05 PM
Jack Webster
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you could rewrite like you suggest.
there's nothing wrong exploring.
it may be best to set your sights
to works you find informing.
if you attempt a draft or two
and think it isn't good,
discard the new without contempt
and keep it as you would.
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