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7/22/2016 11:08:00 AM
Key V.
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Perhaps I could rely on the maps,
the paved roads and tracks but everybody's seen that, in fact..
I take the route unknown where werewolves roam,
this? Yeah this is my home, everyone's known,
The deer in the leaves, birds in the trees,
can't forget mosquitos that always catch your neck or toe,
the rowed boats, so sundown star shows,
everyone goes..a lot of water, we're more celestial,
adventure's of the night time forever unknown,
heavy heap of fur, with such fragile bones,
we're outsiders, the unwiser,
proves that i'm just more in tune with my provider,
the flame that forever burns fire,
big brown eyes that would never expire,
to the rocky mountain top the trek gets higher,
forever in the moment to howl notice prior.
edited by KEYANKH on 7/22/2016
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1/27/2017 12:37:08 AM
aunna jones
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i think it's so great!
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