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4/8/2016 3:49:05 AM
Jemilla Hibonne
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WORKSHOP POEM : I, puppetBASH my skull in why don't yousince you've bashed my heart inyou've torn my soul from my bodyyou spread it thinthe shear taste of your humiliationleaves a sour taste in my mouthas you twisted my heartas ruined my mindBASH my head in why don't youBEND my body to your willI'm one of your puppetsCruel puppeteeryour words mark my back,with bold words of ghostly shame.your words encase painyour words cuts through bonesi display my scaras time only would sooth meas i patiently wait, for whenThe puppet,Masters the puppeteer
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4/8/2016 3:49:58 AM
Jemilla Hibonne
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heres the link
/poem/workshop_poem__i,_puppet_639703
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