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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
11/13/2015 8:57:19 AM

K.M North
Posts: 97
it was this
and then it was that

then we moved back and forth

and the wind shook us to and fro

and back again

because when we wanted to be that

we realized we will always be this

and sometimes that's just all we will be

but for not you be you

and I'll be me

and we'll see just what we want to see

cause I'm either this or that

but for now I'll be the

and you can call it whatever you want
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12/2/2015 8:54:37 AM

K.M North
Posts: 97
Hey Michael, totally trying to be just a pain in the rear end of a fellow poster on here who think he knows everything about poetry. Basically I just wanted to write a poem of his "no" words
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