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8/6/2015 9:27:53 AM
Dr.Hemant Vinze
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Two monks 1A glittering candle flameA candle flame does not flutterand is not extinguishedfor it is determined to glitterand not to be tarnished!Said “Dear devoutHalt a moment and hark!Here is a blemish-less monkeven in the dark!!” 2Candle flame to monkA candle flame fluttered and vanishedfor, it wished not to be tarnished.Said, "Ye monk, mind your deeds blackCharacter is what a man does dark!"
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