Poetry Forum
8/3/2015 3:16:47 PM
Graphite Drug Posts: 81
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I would reinforce Tess’s suggestion to use more imagery than narrate personal experience or “tell” readers. Something else to try is separating clauses by line and sentences or paragraphs with stanzas if you’re not going to use punctuation:
Bitterness spews forth from lips As the heart cracks open Payment for the depth of pain Caused by each vile word once formed None can ever be washed clean again So we wait
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