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11/25/2014 6:03:14 AM
Marquis MC Mills-Cooper Posts: 2
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Based on Christopher Marlowe’s “Passionate Shepherd To His Love”
Come be with me and become my love And we shall prove my dreams correct, That if you join in love with me Another woman I’ll never need
And we will sit among the trees Seeing both the birds and bees, By the water as it falls The birds will sing as passion calls
And I will make you very happy Try and please you ever gladly, Send you flowers at anytime Romantic moonlight as we dine
Off we go a rendezvous A subtle point that no one knew, We’d sit and talk and view the sky Then I’d get lost inside your eyes
I’d whisper soft some poetry By many poets including me, And if these dreams of mine you like Come be with me and become my love
I’d wish to see you everyday To show my love a different way, If these my dreams you like so much Then be with me and become my love
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