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9/10/2014 8:34:32 PM Gabe Shelly Posts: 95	Lady, You make me hurt-- With nary a glance you kill me-- Your Beauty is as the stars in heaven... Only the gods can touch 9/6/'14 edited by Gabe on 10/21/2014 edited by Gabe on 10/21/2014 edited by Gabe on 10/22/2014 edited by Gabe on 12/3/2014 edited by Gabe on 12/4/2014
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9/24/2014 11:39:11 PM Bob Atkinson Posts: 294	Nice collection there Gabe of trite phrases and cliche's
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10/21/2014 5:36:09 PM Gabe Shelly Posts: 95	True, the phrases are trite and tawdry, but that's what girls like... No longer are people interested enough to take the time and understand a sonnet or a poem of length. Many times just writing in the simplest of words people forget themselves and are disarmed of the masks they wear...
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