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2/20/2014 2:06:30 PM
Gabe Shelly
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Goodmorning Sunshine
You fill me just...
With your priceless advice I 'Come Out and Play'.
And when I see your "pretty boys" I try to have fun,
But when you're around me it's starting to show.
And all I can say is, I gotta get away from me
Cause you've started to grow
Hate
2/14/'14
edited by Gabe on 2/20/2014
edited by Gabe on 2/20/2014
edited by Gabe on 3/11/2014
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