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10/20/2010 1:34:59 PM

Diondra Johnson
Posts: 3
i'll make you payfor all the things you've doneeverything that came fromyour sweet lips was a liei thought you were the onethe one i could trustin time of needyou just leaveyou take what you want and bleed me drytil there's nothing lefti will make you PAY

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