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5/8/2010 12:28:26 PM

Master builder
Building bridges
Bridging hearts.

“Build me a house of links,” I asked him,
and he built me a beautiful song.

“Build me a house of truth,” I asked him,
and he spoke from a warm heart.

“Build me a house of hope,” I asked him,
and he healed my broken soul.

“Build me a house of smiles,” I asked him,
and it was authentic and whole.

The master builder in my heart.
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5/8/2010 7:10:41 PM

Michael Benkhen
Posts: 40
Awww How Lovely...
The Imagination at work

The land is littered with the graves of animals I never killed yet somehow mourn.
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5/9/2010 6:05:03 AM

You make me laugh, Michael. Thank you for your welcome comments. Catie
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