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10/24/2013 6:38:55 PM

Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133
When the world is out of reality
Demand resources despite thebrutalities
Food, clothing, water, inches of theMother Earth
Pure essentials since we were givenbirth


Ship food to China to process
Our dream bubble needs a recess
You tell me the food on your plate isreal
Why do you feel bloated after everymeal?


Generations arriving with defects
Pesticides are creating societiesrejects
All you can say is it's cheaper
Wish technology made a common senseseeker


To deny Earth her natural gifts
She'll birth a storm that will make youdrift
Second thought, down those pesticides
You gotta brain, it's your roll of thedice
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